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Eternal Sky

I can see two souls floating through the air, Loving doves seeming like an ordinary pair.

You can almost see all the emotions they both must beautifully share. Although one mates’ death just seems- so unfair.

The heart and soul of this lonely dove sadly starts to tear. This unbearable pain this creature cannot bear. Into the skies it slowly stares- Watching others floating off in pairs.

While the lonely soul starts to die, he thinks of his mate and starts to cry. One of these days he will once again fly.

Along side his mate- In these eternal skies. They fly and they sing; A beautiful sight. And every day together they take flight. Almost like two tangled kits.

Together their love so graceful with life in this one and only eternal blue sky.
©2008-2009 ~Ml4
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Author's Comments

I love this poem! It just all popped up into my head as I was typing just now! This is SOOO going into my composition poetry book of hate and fate!!! HECK YESSS!!!! I feel so accomplished!!!! :D

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:iconorochimaru-sama323:
omg, thats so touching DDDDX

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What a nice poem ^^

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Syuusuke Fuji will NEVER stop living the Tenipuri☆Dream~

:heart:I always knew that looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughs would make me cry:heart:

Hinata in ~Naru-Land
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Awwww thank you for the compliment ^^ My teacher said it almost made her cry but in a good way. ^^

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Thank you, I don't show my mom my poems though but I think if she were more poetic she would say the same thing. ^^

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I LOVE HUGS!!!!! :hug::glomp: But keep an emotional distance before I sick me Pirate monkeys in Outer Space on you...:matrixfight: Beware they have blue berry muffin cupholders..... AND PIE!!!! :pie: WITH CAKE!!!:cake:
:iconorochimaru-sama323:
lmao, ya XD
i luv writing poems 2!!!
i actually lik 2 write a lot of things!!!

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Yea.... I remember I had a few books full of poetry and when she found them she burned them... So I don't EVER wanna show her ANY of my work...

YAAAAAAY! New poem buddy!

Yea, I like to wright scripts too! It's fun!

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I LOVE HUGS!!!!! :hug::glomp: But keep an emotional distance before I sick me Pirate monkeys in Outer Space on you...:matrixfight: Beware they have blue berry muffin cupholders..... AND PIE!!!! :pie: WITH CAKE!!!:cake:
:iconorochimaru-sama323:
whoa, she did????
im sorrry DX
i nvr show any1 in my real family my work as in writing.
trust me, they dont wanna read it!!!!!
they mak a big deal outta it.
and i hate that!!!!

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Yea, almost 208 poems; short and REALLY long.
It's alright...
I know what you mean. Like this one time I showed my friend a REALLY emotional poem and she thought I was gothic and had thoughts of suicide, it was stupid! She totally over reacted and she cut me with a shard of glass on my leg too. She said I had demons in me... I still have a scar...

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:iconorochimaru-sama323:
omg, she did????
thats sooooo mean and stupid!!!
i think she has demons in her body!!!!

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